CHARACTER: THE DESCRIPTION. INSTINCT D'
, TAKE THIS PAPER AND PEN AND PAPER TO DISCARD DESCRIPTION OF A PERSON (OR MORE '). BUT WHO? THE PRIMARY SEVERE MISTRESS OF THE GIRL FOR WHICH WAS BEFORE THE COOKED, A DECEASED RELATIVE, a man known on the train, anyway ... SOMEONE THAT YOU KNOW THAT YOU KNOW OR EVEN FOR A MOMENT!
WARNING! An outline NOT AS "THE COLOR IS BLUE EYES, BLOND HAIR ... Put it as a memory, put the description in a story ... In short, TAKE ADVANTAGE OF THIS EXERCISE TRAINING IN WRITING IN GENERAL, AS WELL AS TO THE DESCRIPTION OF THE CHARACTERS!
My exercise:
Patrick darted like lightning in front of the Chinese restaurant. He was not accustomed to run, we can say that was not a perfect athlete despite being very tall and rangy, with difficulty breathing every time he leaned his foot on the ground next to a lever. The incorrect breathing was starting to make him head spin, but the adrenaline helped him to continue to run. Again, if there was still need to get away, I do not know, that was several feet did not turn to see if the black car was following him again. His friends had already left for a couple of blocks back, and Patrick decided on impulse to head for their hideout, the "Adriana Club. Surely Marco, Gianluca and Benedict were there waiting for him, teetering between the beams their refuge. Pat climbed rapidly on a wall, then falling weight in someone's garden. He felt his arm burning and then exposed to light of electric lamps, a long cut that started from the finger that ended just before the elbow gushing blood appeared black in the darkness. It controlled the rest of the body: after all he was naked except for shoes and white socks, there was the risk of having damaged something more important than a stupid arm. With relief, found that only the sharp knees were skinned and nothing more. He pulled up his socks and settled down with a hand gesture to smooth hair while trying to understand why this place seemed so family. He noticed the garden gnomes, and a sophisticated swing and gazebo for a while hoping not to be finished at the home of Anthony, what was once his best friend. When he noticed the huge fake insects and Dutch clogs hanging near the door, he realized that his intuition was right for once. Climbed over the wall again to go as soon as possible, this time being careful not to cut with glass. Once back on the road, decided that he would not bother his friends, at least for that night. He would return home, he would had a nice cold shower and then, between the sheets of the bed, would have laughed at the thought of her three friends, still naked, waiting for him to the 'Adriana Club. "So they learn to offer to walk away with a pea outside Bologna. "Mused without malice. He squeezed his eyes between the green and gray then breathed a sigh of relief for fortunate that terrifying black car was gone.
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